PaRappa the Rapper: Sick day! Page 1

Yaaayyyy~! I FINALLY DID IT! I AM DOING A DOUJINSHI!! 
I looks terrible! I know~! I can explain! The lines were because I saved it as a jpeg rather than a mdp (FireAlpaca's native format). Why was this bad? Because I still had a transparent sketch underneath! The lines and sketch were fused as one. Imagine my frustration. IMAGINE IT, DANGIT!! I used GIMP to separated the lines, but it wasn't completely seamless, it looked a lot better before, but I wasn't gonna do it all over again!  And the screentones? Well, I didn't really know how to use them... I hope that I can make it better with time...

STORY SO FAR: PaRappa is bored, so he daydreams about his girlfriend, Sunny. His thoughts get interrupted by a call from a sick Sunny. She asks him to nurse her back to health, he agrees in a daze, wondering what he just did. Tbc.
(I will use this as a reference and copy paste it into future pages.)

I tried. I really really tried. (Dat second panel doe. Did I even try on that one?)

EDIT: Second page is up!